My Book Has Undergone a Do Over

Eshelle Butler was born and raised in Chicago Illinois. She graduated from Columbia College Chicago and has a BA in Marketing Communications and Journalism. She also has a background in music. In addition to being an Author, she is also a Poet, Screenwriter, and Blogger. Eshelle is divorced and has one child and currently resides in a small town outside of Chicago Illinois.
Over the past few weeks I had been working on my next novel Titled Murder in The Family and I found myself completely unmotivated to write. Every night when it came time for me to work on this I found myself not wanting to write it. I was bored with the story. It wasn’t bad but it just wasn’t knocking my socks off if you know what I mean. It was just…average. I never like to make anything average. It must be above average to make me want to invest time in it.
Murder in The Family was being told in the third person from the point of view of the family. I tried to make this as interesting as possible but it just wasn’t working. The pace was off; the dialog was boring and I just couldn’t force myself to like this story. So, one night I was talking to my son about it and then suddenly he tells me I should tell the story from the point of view of the killer. I thought that sounded so much better but I was afraid to go through the trouble of starting the book over. I had already written sixty pages and you know how I feel about killing a story. But am I killing it, if I start over with some changes?
My answer is no. A friend of mine from Twitter told me to go with my gut instinct and that is what I decided to do. I started this novel over to be told from the point of view of the killer and it is being told in the first person.  The title has also been changed to “Can You Hear Me?” This is not a mystery so I can tell you who the killer is. The